Tuesday Snippet - Shira (working title)

So without further ado, here is a snippet of the revisions I've been doing for Shira. I've changed the name to Hero of Corsindor.

The messenger wore a velvet cut-back frock with single-breasted buttons fasted on the chest. Underneath the coat, he wore white lace frills under the a black silk waistcoat. His breeches were a stylish black velvet and he wore…