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The Goldfinch Promise

The Goldfinch Promise

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Cynthia Bagley
Jun 22, 2011
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Be watchful

of the shaky tree

with thorny branch

and fingers.

It catches you

in twig-like nests

and eats your flesh

for dinner.

The cheeping finch

will guide you through

the ever-tangling brush,

And bring you

safely to your home

before the creeping dusk.

It is One Shot Poetry Wednesday at One Stop Poetry. More poems here.

This poem was written over two years ago after…

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