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Childhood lesson - a villanelle

Childhood lesson - a villanelle

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Cynthia Bagley
May 21, 2013
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I cannot color in the lines or hold a crayon in my hand; my drawings cannot be refined.

"Look mother, see my great design." Your frowning face, a reprimand-- I cannot color in the lines.

You clean my art with turpentine; the lipstick mess seems to expand. My drawings cannot be refined.

My next attempt at redesign-- my crayon art was in freehand. I cannot c…

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